Reviews for When to Hold On, When to Let Go
squiggle-line chapter 9 . 7/27/2007

Paul. Matt. Paul. Matt. Ah, I can't decide! I like how you've written them both to be such nice guys that it's not immediately clear who Becca will end up with. The inital Paul-kiss seem a bit abrupt but I guess if they've been seeing each other at the diner for a couple weeks, than it makes sense. But in terms of the story pace, it seems a little off. Maybe emphasize these diner meetings and the change in time a little more?

This was a fun read. *off to look at more!*
Seremela chapter 9 . 5/14/2007
..hehe. Update as soon as is humanly possible. chapter 9 . 3/3/2007
Hmm. So, I read "The Reality of Fairy Tales, which was AMAZING. But quite longer and I can see that you were more passionate about writing that one, especially since you finished it. Which brings me to berate you for not updating in two years ! You're killing me ! You can't leave these characters and ME at this point, at nine chapters ! It's unfair. So PLEASE update ! Try, at least. For your readers
helligonian chapter 9 . 5/14/2006
this is really good - keep going!
sakurachan101 chapter 9 . 4/17/2006
luv the story... i know matt's a funny guy, and i really do like him, but i find becca and paul the better pairing... i mean, it's probably b/c they've just met/don't know eachother that well but i think they'd have a far healthier relationship...

NEways, the blabbering aside, i really enjoy reading ur story! update sometime soon!
Sheets chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Great so far! RL
MJ chapter 9 . 5/24/2005
This is getting interesting. I really want to know how they are going to react to each other when they meet again. Paul is not such a bad guy. I kind of hope he doesn't get hurt by Matt or chap. as always. PLZ update as soon as you can. P.S: No pressure!
rushed88 chapter 9 . 5/21/2005
update sooner next time please. i'm looking forward to it.
CynicInLove chapter 9 . 2/27/2005
missed the update a long long time ago. forgot to check for this story. oops. but u can't really blame me though. anyways, it seems like she's going to co ntinue her relationship with Paul. perhaps he'll be god for her for a while. or...longer. ah..depends. anyways, please update sooN!
babydoll-007 chapter 9 . 2/27/2005
i think i did a double take when i saw that this was updated, lol. you already know how much i love this story and how sad i am to know that even with a new (and great, by the way) chapter out, it is still on hold. oh well, c'est la vie, right? can't wait until you get the itch to pick this one up again...-laura
ReinaLucille chapter 9 . 2/12/2005
oh it's such a shame this story is on hiatus right now because i'm quite possibly addicted to it. i'm routing for mike all the way, even if i can't help but like paul. please update soon!
nedi chapter 9 . 2/11/2005
wonderful chapter. i hate it when someone as great as matt gets hurt like this... and it's worse that becca apparently has feelings for him that she won't admit.

murky chapter 9 . 2/10/2005
To me, it seems pretty clear cut what she SHOULD do. (Matt of course. I mean, even if I don't like him much right now, it's obvious she's never really got over him.) Though I look at the title and start to worry. Let go? \ Sounds like she's going to let go of Matt. I guess we'll just have to wait and see where this goes, huh!
murky chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Hello! Yeah, I know updates are probably going to be few and far between, but doesn't matter ) I guess life never really turns out the way you want it too, huh. and now she's kind of stuck. I guess there's nothing wrong living life the way she is, it's just I would hope for something more. And yet, it isn't that she ain't smart enough to go (that's what I assume), it's just that she's stuck now! Hope things turn out for the better \
quotata chapter 9 . 2/10/2005
lol i thought this was on hold..
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