Reviews for When to Hold On, When to Let Go
GinaO chapter 6 . 4/29/2004
Great, awesome chapter! This surely is getting better, and poor Matt :) well I hope you keep the chapters coming. You're doing a great job. :)
ghenne04 chapter 6 . 4/29/2004
Ooh! Yay! I like! This story is getting very very interesting! I love the way Matt is getting all upset, except I don't want him to be upset - but it makes him seem much more human. Nice job! Keep writing and update soon!
zagato chapter 6 . 4/29/2004
great chapter. somebody is jealous. i think matt and becca would be together eventually. then again, maybe not.
Jiro chapter 6 . 4/29/2004
I'm torn. I don't know whether to think of Matt as a jealous, selfish dumbass, or just a jealous, confused dumbass. Maybe both? Anyway, this chapter was great, please update soon!
Emmi chapter 5 . 4/28/2004
Good, good, GREAT! I'm so liking this story. I loved loved LOVED 'The Reality of Fairy Tales' and I'm loving this story as well. I can't wait till the next chapter. Your writing rocks!
SilentYoshi chapter 5 . 4/28/2004
oh! i like this story! keep it up! it's good!
ghenne04 chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
Interesting.. Very interesting. I like having it from Pauls point of view. The only comment/criticism I have is to watch your typos. There was once you said her intead of she (I think), and you said "is" instead of If".. But if you just fix those little mistakes, it'd be great. Nice job. Keep writing and update soon!
LaFleurRouge chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
What happened? I really liked the old idea of a make over! But now I realize that maybe this is better b/c who ever she ends up with will like her for who she is, which is a very good thing. Okay, you are forgiven. Interesting chapter...I noticed that the sparks didn't exactly fly during the kiss. But what if Becca (when we get this far) thinks kissing Matt would be like kissing her brother? Just wondering. I also really like this Paul chacter too so if the happy ending ends with two couples (B/M and P/?) that would work for me (or B/P and M/?). I like happy endings and if this story has a not happy ending I might get sad, or something. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to read more.
UPDATE when you find the time chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
This is such a good story, and I really want Matt and Becca to end up together. The new title is cool, but it forshadows some letting go? It better not be by Matt or I'll hunt you down and... oo I like the Holding on. MATT HOLD ON WITH YOUR LIFE! Paul's coming to rob the love you don't even see. Sorry, I get a bit emotional, but can you put a bit more Matt and Becca time (more tension)? It's your story, but I would love you oh so very much if you would do that for me a lowly reader. penname on this site is de Leon...critique my stuff if you have to time. Only if you have the time.
AuroraBorealis7 chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
WOOHOO go Becca! Nice maneuvering! I'm partial to Becca because her name is so awesome. GO Beccas. Okay sorry I'm a nerd but this extra update was a special treat for me on finals week!
Scorpio chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
LOL! That was a cute chapter! Anyways, can't wait for more updates! U better get on with loading the chapters, u know. I am quite impatient! lol! Just kidding! Take ur time to make the story great. But not to much time, to make us readers...
GinaO chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
Yay! Thanks for the new chapter... things are certainly warming out. I like the new title. too. :)
crazylady4 chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
hey i love this story its great you should deffinately update ut soon.
Jiro chapter 5 . 4/27/2004
Wow. Quick update. I'm impressed. I was sort of confused at first but then again, I'm not the brightest crayon in the box. I'm glad this chapter told the story from Paul's POV. It makes things more interesting. Great chapter!
AuroraBorealis7 chapter 4 . 4/26/2004
YAY, I'm just so happy... i love updates. Even if it WAS a short chapter, I love the way Matt's mind works...
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