Reviews for When to Hold On, When to Let Go |
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![]() ![]() Haha! His plan for 'cheering her up' after getting her to ditch Paul reminded me so much of a husband trying to placate his disappointed wife, it was uncanny! Matt is definitely jealous, or at least possessive. There's absolutely NO reason for him to dislike doctors. But... It's actually knida cute. Especially his plan to use Becca's brother to do his bidding and be the 'bad guy'. Haha. I love this story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() oh oh! someone's getting jelaous... Great update. I loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Matt so cute! I love this story, can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Goody! it's only going to get better from here now! Yey! Write more soon. P.S. What did Becca write on the back of the photo of her and Matt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! The characters seem so real, like people you've known all your life. Three chapters in and I already feel somewhat attached, that's a pretty big feat! I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you're writing another story! I can't wait to see what happens next- I can tell that I'm already falling in love with your characters... ) Wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this looks really good..post more soon |
![]() ![]() Aww! Poor Becca! Matt goes off to college and completely forgets about her! That ass! Awesome story! Can't wait to see where you take this! |
![]() ![]() OH! This surely is getting better! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work! :) |
![]() ![]() Oh! This is coming out so interesting! I wanna know who gets her at the end...Matt or the doctor guy? Oh! U have to update it really soon! I can hardly wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yay! Things are starting to get interesting! And I can see exactly how things might end up getting difficult between them - changing who you are for other people isn't the smartest idea. But anyway - nice job! Keep writing and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful chapter. that was really smart of becca to ask matt's opinion. thank you for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Glad your back...and sorry I'm a little slow on the updates cuz life is a little hectic. Anyways, I love this story as much as Reality, really. I think these two are different in the way that this one has a simpler plot...because the one to Reality was complicated...I mean really complicated. So that makes this an easier read though it's still just as good. In the last chapter I was laughing when Becca was shocked at Matt because he said something sucked and I can clearly remember how I got in trouble for saying the same things when I was little...LOL. But yeah, great job on the story and I'm glad your stuck on original fiction because that means more updates for us :) Update soon alright? Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is shaping up very well, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon _ |