|Reviews for Death On The Keys|
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
that was so fantastically put!
i just deleted everything i wrote, it was all nonsense. i love it basically.
| Deathsythe chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
(Sings) "If you are near, to the dark, I will tell you 'bout the sun. You are here, no escape, from my visions of the world. You will cry, all alone, but it does not mean a thing to me..."
Sorry, this just reminded me of .hack/sign and I my favorite song on the soundtrack, "Aura".
Anyway, another good poem, but another spelling mistake. In the third stanza you mispelled 'too' by saying 'to'. I honestly don't see how people make this mistake; it's never been an issue with me, but hey, I spell stuff wrong too that other people don't so we're even huh? Anyway, good poem. Keep up the good work.
"You think so too right?"