Oh. My. God. Please write the next chapter already! Imma die! I loved that sooooo much! What happens with Kay and Cake!

For some reason, I can tell that you wrote it while 'really drunk'. Hm... I wonder how? XD

Seriously, though, this character is extremely hilarious, and the situations you put him in are even more so. A few suggestions: work on your grammar, and your pacing (events seem to be happening just a BIT too quickly) and you'll be golden. Hope to see more!

Hi,
You reviewed my fic "More Than You Could Ever Imagine" a while back, and I was wondering if you could help me out a bit. "you can't really say 'vous le laisserez seul-" I was wondering if you could tell me the proper way to phrase what I meant for it to say? Also, I do know that lawyer is 'avocat-' the problem is, when I put "lawyer" into the translator I accidentally typed "laywer" and it didn't translate it. Anyway, I like this fic, it's very cute. _ Thanks.

salutations. quite funny but hum...grammar and spelling?...hum...hum...le fond de lair est frais...hum, ya plus de saisons...i like saying hum...hum i must go now before i write something totally stupid...i cant believe they didnt get my joke in camp today. i was this weird zen person and then i said that some girls karma ran over my dogma and no one laughed. i thought it was quite funny.
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I like it much. The grammar and spelling is all over the place but that adds to it in a funny way, and the character is friggin hilarious. Continue!

sasha the grammar is a bit bizzare but then again so a re you. i like it alot event hough it is a tad strange. keep writting about cake wich i agree is much better than cherry pie. bizou!
~charada~