|Reviews for Joy|
| susy chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I like the vagueness but I think the vagueness sometimes takes over the story you are telling. That means it's too vague. You are telling a story.
And this is not an essay. But this is a beautiful story.
| jez two chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
This is a truly heart wrenching and beautiful piece. I hope you keep writing and if you have anything as glorious as this please (I'm begging) post it!
| lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
That is so honest, and so gorgeous. Wonderful work.
| the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This is really good writing. You are so talented. Your ability to take your emotions and experiences and turn them into art is amazing. And such art! You are so good.
| Evilmonkeys chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
o! tingles! that was really beautiful. as you can see made me tingle.
| Admiral Rupert chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
*sniff* That was really beautiful. I mean it.
| Miss Wendy chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
This is just *lovely*.
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
You are increible at describing beauty..iner and outer. Well done.
| MagenDavid chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
I am seriously wiping tears of my face.
The only words that exist in any language that can describe how gorgeous this poem is only exist in the language that g-d speaks to his angels.
*bursts into a new billow of tears*
If only they could be together!