Reviews for Faded Forgotten Forever
Wtf is This Shit chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I loved it! This is my favourite poem (so far!) of yours. You made one spelling mistake: 'So it is I to say toady'. But it was excellent!
emptyword chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Another one that ends with "forever"... _ Like I said, mystical. Though this one is much more painful and grittier. Your emotion in this comes across well.
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
definately captures the moment. I like how you took the title from the last word of the last three lines. Written very well (like all of the rest of your pieces P) one spelling error.. but other than that it was a great poem. D


Thank you for your review on 'Worlds' I'm glad you liked it ) ty ty ty! D
Punkerella chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
This struck a chord with me as it pretty much sums up my mood at the moment.
I like your choice of words.