Reviews for Forgotten Days
Tecna chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Very to the point! Really brings out the effect of the words, when I read it, it makes me think of my past! Graet use of vocab and imagery! Also thanx for reviewing my "Why Can't This World Be?"
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
i simply love your vocabulary and word chocies. you seem to have a grasp upon the imapact your writing can have just by using certain words and that really adds to an already great poem.
emptyword chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This is incredible. A fantastic portrayal of old age, with nothing of entertainment but to relive the past. Wow. This is just chock-ful of vivid pictures. Very very good.
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Very dark. It is hm.. i don't know how to explain /. I liked it... exspecially the last line... kinda reminded me of Poe with the 'never more' ).


Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm going to go read the update of 'Immoral Death'!
TheOddLife chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Lovely. Keep writing!
Valo chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Beautiful.. well done. Good job.