Reviews for Forgotten Days
Tecna chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Very to the point! Really brings out the effect of the words, when I read it, it makes me think of my past! Graet use of vocab and imagery! Also thanx for reviewing my "Why Can't This World Be?"
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
i simply love your vocabulary and word chocies. you seem to have a grasp upon the imapact your writing can have just by using certain words and that really adds to an already great poem.
emptyword chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This is incredible. A fantastic portrayal of old age, with nothing of entertainment but to relive the past. Wow. This is just chock-ful of vivid pictures. Very very good.
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Very dark. It is hm.. i don't know how to explain /. I liked it... exspecially the last line... kinda reminded me of Poe with the 'never more' ).

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Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm going to go read the update of 'Immoral Death'!
TheOddLife chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Lovely. Keep writing!
Valo chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Beautiful.. well done. Good job.