Reviews for Camraderie
Erendur Amandil chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
short, yet to the point; long ago you told me about using etc. in poems; and today ive decided that i want to do an outlook on ALL my previous writings and see what i can change; i will leave the original pieces ive done in tact; im just trying to remember the true poetry format. was it abbacddc? or whats the idea of poetry besides a moderate rhyme scheme per say?
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
cool, i like this, very cool images. I don't understand this though, "Melting, no melding into the person next to you" maybe a typing error? do you still write? i hope you do write but no longer post, would be better than not writing at all x weasel within x