Reviews for Inside
Sun-Kissed Lover chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
The blood one sounds better to me...but I'm just creepy and wierd like feel free to ignore me. You're really good though. Post more so I can read them.
Turena chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
thanks, one for blood (keeping track)
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
i think that the line: "i wish you hadn't fed me the blood from your body..." is better.
It gives the poem more meaning. However, both options are great! )