Reviews for eMpTyV
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
Whew that was a mouthfull of words WAH! lol ok anyway just went to your faceparty site and you look neat-o and I thought you deserved some reviews so yay, here you go. You have a excessive amount of good vocabulary, not bad for such a short humor-is-tic piece.
Jenna xx
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
your third and fifth stanxas are great, but the rest of the poem seems kind of rant-ish, like something you'd hear any anarchist teenager saying. Make the rest of the poem like your third and fifth stanzas, and this poem will be excellent.