Reviews for Last Dream
amy hobbes chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
m...maybe its about heaven, as a mother figure pehaps. exquisite.
PuzzledThinker chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Hm..I'd say this is good BUT you should include the title.
emptyword chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
well, at first I thought it was a sort of "entering death" dream. But as the poem continued, more and more of it seemed to deal with life, real life. And the pain that comes with it of course. And then..."for the last time," that was pretty powerful. She's leaving "dreamworld" forever then? Or is it life?
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
hm i liked the last line. It is different but i dunno i like it. Paints a nice picture )

*Silent Writer*

Thank you or you review on "Sweet Sin"
Sleepy Idea chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
It's a lovely poem... Wow. Its really sweet, very creative and i think that it reminds me of something. Oh well, never mind. *lost in thought* -
Frozen Music Note chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Very sweet!
Starfire Rhapsody chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
I really like this poem! I like all of yours though seeing as you reviewed mine I figure I should review yours too _ Keep on writing!
Ankhetperue chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
That's brilliant...That's great! .
her descent chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
aww. very sweet... makes one feel loved by just reading it. :) nice.