Reviews for System
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
do you ever get that feeling? Sometimes you think, "oh don't be so stupid, everyone's lives are as complicated as yours! everybody else has been through this, has survived this, you're exagerrating, being too dramatic." that's what's true i suppose. but then, sometimes, i think, "well actually my problems are many people have experienced such and such," and though i know the truth i start to doubt.
anyway, i reckon that your poem conveys that kind of thing brilliantly. individuality? does it really exist?
twisted little secret chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
Interesting piece, I like the coldness that comes off it,it really hits the point home. Brilliant imagery.