Reviews for Losing
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
This is a well written poem with such love behind it!
Matt Alan chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
This is good Leo...
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
OMG, this was the most beautiful and meaningful piece! Yet its so very sad. I hope things start to look up for you.
ElizabethMary chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
WOW!
short and sweet!
I really do believe you hit the nail right on the head.
this is the most moving piece i have read on this site in quite awile..Well done
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
You're on fire. I can barely keep up. The poetry king is on the prowl. You're spitting out these poem like there's no tomorrow. The poem was very emotionally riveting. OMG I sound like Siskel and Eibert don't I? My moment of cheesiness is over. I promise. Still great poem. I really like the line where you said I'm beginning to lose hope
I'm beginning to fall
For life without you
Doesn't seem to matter at all...
That just seemed to touch a certain part of my heart. So great job. Oh please forgive my hyperness. I've just down 6 count them 6 York Peppermint Patties. Me and chocolate just don't mix. Shutting up now. TTfn.
I hope you don't mind me putting you on my fave lists?