Reviews for Lyf's Taking
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
That was short but it says so much in the six lines! It's right to the point and so good!
Matt Alan chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
We all have these feelings you express them really well good job man!
marabelle chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
your rhymes flow better here. j'adore les poems come ca: i love short poems (sorry i dont know if you understand french or non) anyways well done
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
Hey it's me again I bet you're sick of hearing from me huh? (smiles) Anyway you know that I have to leave a review. It would be a shame if I didn't. Well to start off this was a very sad poem. Literally broke my heart, seeing as how I sometimes feel the same way some times. So once again great job. AND speaking of which, you should really be published yourself. You're one of the few authors that I visit frequently. So that has to stand for ? Let me shut up now. I'll leave you alone now. Signing out the pest. (The annoying pest.)LOL. TTFN
blurgh chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
special, nice
short but meaningful.