|Reviews for Exfoliation|
| Shandris chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
I love it!
I really like it up til thelast line, and that only gets to me because if you leave it out it's all about the metephore of exfoliateing. Then you just pop in something about flying. That's just my opinion tho , and I might be interpreating it a toatally different way then you!
But I really do like the whole ideal.