|Reviews for blackbird|
| Dying Rose chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
This is wonderful. Your characters are so real. it almost made me cry...I never cry anymore. I feel everything going on here; I've lost a friend before like this. It so hard to have things ripped from us.
| carlson chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
okay, i started reading this and i thought it was only a poem and i thought "this girl has completely stolen the song by the beatles!" but then i realized what was going on- hahahaha, i laughed at that part.
then i read the whole thing and i really liked it. :(:(:(
| bobbysinblack chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
that was beautiful. i know what it's like, to come to school, expect everything's going to be cool and find out something like that has happened. i came to school one day and found out one of the girls in my class had hung herself. it was a horrible day. if you want to chat, just email me
| floorcollision chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
ah- this made me cry. you are excellent at conveying the true story, you know?
i think it'd be great if you developed the characters a little more, and tied in the song the end again-
i mean, you could make it longer if you want.
but it's great as it is- i really love it.