Reviews for Losing favor in your eyes
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Oh wow this one was really good, Keep it Up! and thanks for the review
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
that's it.
you're going in
my favourites.
marabelle chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
good, yes really good. the short lines really work in your favour here. definetly a favourite of mine.
bien fait
oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Hey! you're never alone.
I'm always here, as always your poem touch my heart. Just so you'll know I will always treasure them. And by the way,
What did you mean by unfaithful Missy?
Love It 2 thumbs up.
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Nice rhythem. Make it just a little longer and you'd have yourself a great song. _
Leo chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
this is awesome you are so good and by saying so lil it seems to have a big message! I like it and i dont care that you visit my page and leave reviews i look twoards to it every day your opinion means alot to me! Thanx for reviewin me and as long as my poems are good ill keep postin em!
Beached Stars chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
After reading this poem, I believe that it's about someone who had done something very wrong...and is forever punished for what they can never correct...
I like the storytelling.