|Reviews for Losing favor in your eyes|
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Oh wow this one was really good, Keep it Up! and thanks for the review
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
you're going in
| marabelle chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
good, yes really good. the short lines really work in your favour here. definetly a favourite of mine.
| oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Hey! you're never alone.
I'm always here, as always your poem touch my heart. Just so you'll know I will always treasure them. And by the way,
What did you mean by unfaithful Missy?
Love It 2 thumbs up.
| Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Nice rhythem. Make it just a little longer and you'd have yourself a great song. _
| Leo chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
this is awesome you are so good and by saying so lil it seems to have a big message! I like it and i dont care that you visit my page and leave reviews i look twoards to it every day your opinion means alot to me! Thanx for reviewin me and as long as my poems are good ill keep postin em!
| Beached Stars chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
After reading this poem, I believe that it's about someone who had done something very wrong...and is forever punished for what they can never correct...
I like the storytelling.