really nice story. loved it.

i feel like it's a dare.

Dear deliquent-romantic person:

I was unable to do my daily chores because I was so wrapped up in this story. My mom will probably kill me now when she walks in the door and finds that I failed in this department. I love love LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. While I felt a few areas could use work, the while plot was amazing and I LOVE (notice that I keep using that word lol) how Jason was such a gentleman in this last chapter. And how you ended it with the heavens and the sky meeting was just PERFECT. POETIC in fact! I'm definately going to check out your other stories once I do my chores. Goodbye now and happy writing!

I like this story...SIKE I love it. Haha :) Cant wait to read more !

I love this story .

I love your story so much that I'm reviewing! Gah! If I knew that I would get so hooked to this story I would've clicked ages ago! I love your characters!

Oh but one thing: it IS legal for a step brother and step sister to get married. So as to say, Crystal and Jason could've been together with no problem even if their parents married. Except that some people might find it 'wrong'. As long as they are not blood related, then their isn't really anything wrong with the two of them having a relationship. God, I hate pointing things out, but in your story you stated that it would be incestuous, when it's actually perfectly legal.

Okay, sorry if someone already told you that or you already know. Like, really sorry. Heh heh...

Oh and my favourite characters are Jade and Gem. They're just plain awesome lol. xD I hope that you don't take this as a negative review, it's supposed to be positive. :P

I like your pen name and Happy New Year three days late!

So I ended up reading another one of your stories. :) Again, cute. I think the writing drastically improved from beginning to end. So I'm guessing that Crystal found out that Jason didn't exactly plan for her to be dumped the next day? Cooper seems like an ass, honestly... why did Crystal blame it all on Jason though? Cooper was the one who went off to someone else and went along with the plan or whatever...

Their parents are all crazy. Talk about coincidences. Anyways I don't have much to say, but it's sad that Richard got left in the end. Crystal's mom seemed pretty insensitive about the whole thing too...

Anyways, cute story. Might check out some of your others as well. :)

- Alyssa

OMG, that's so sweet!

It's a cliched story, which is awesome!

Thanks so much!

See my first review. I liked your story, by the way.

I don't know... I was kinda getting used to the whole concept of the story.

P.S. I broke the chair while reading your story. Ops. hehe

Love hurts. I've never been in love, but it sounds like it's worth the pain.

A sweet, heart-pounding romantic-comedy...

AW! They're so cute. It reminds me of my wish to go back in time to when my parents went on a field trip in sixth grade and ended up having their first arguement (like an old married couple). 'Cept this is way sweeter. So I repeat, AW!

That is so messed up! giggle

It's good. It incorporates that whole "laugh-at-the-main-character-because-his?her-life-sucks" concept while still being one of those stupid cliches that you can't get enough of and maintaining originality.