Reviews for Why I Hate You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() inner demons... nice. I HAVE INNER DEMONS TOO! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! DO YOU SEE THE DEMONS WHEN I LAUGH MY EVIL LAUGH? *evil laugh* You: AH DEMONS! Me: MUHAHAHAHA DEMON CITY HERE! *cough* -ahem- *cough* let me start over... Hi my name is... wait... starting over again. LOVE your story... AWESOME, GENIUS, update it update update update (x 10 million) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well what? just kidding... loved it... awesome... ohh lookie... more chapters... *continues reading...* |
![]() ![]() hey awesome chapter~~ and the last chapter as well. sry but im going to watch friends lol but I WILL review btr next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great one! I'm really enjoying this story. The mud was ingenious! This should be one interesting trip! I can't wait to see what Jason has been thinking, maybe he is realizing that Crystal likes him. If that happens, maybe he'll tell her that he likes her too. Yay! Anyway, update again soon, I can't wait to see what else happens on their weekend camping trip! It should be interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Poor Crystal, just as she begins to realize she wants more with Jason he begins to accept the fact that they will be step-siblings! A double wedding how twisted, that'll definitely be a source of amusement. I can't wait for the camp-out! Well, I'm onto the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Oh, hah hah Now I WANT to have a mud fight. Presumably one where there is a hot boy. Heh heh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Nice Crystal-Jason moment(s) there. They warmed the cockils of my heart. Hahaha. Jason wasn't a jerk in this one! Brownie points for him. He's so cute and I can't wait to read his POV, so post it soon, okay? Okay. |
![]() ![]() I cant wait for jason's pov. Please hurry up and update, i love this story, it's really great. But how are they going to be together if they're step siblings? i know they're not technically related, but still...well i'm sure you have something up your sleeve, and i cant wait to find out what it is. ~Bleeding Onyx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv luv it. yay. update we |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an interesting chapter! One of the best yet! I think you should send Jason and Crystal on a hike and get them lost together for a night! That would be entertaining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will they have their first kiss? I hope they lock lips soon! This is a good chapter! I like Gem and Jade! Also I think you should have more Crystal and Jason alone time! |
![]() ![]() I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! I have been following it for a while nw, but I don't believe that I have reviewed yet. Well, just wanted to let you know tha I hvaen't seen any errors. .Well none that caught my story, but I was probably too engrossed in the text to actually be thinking of the technical technicalities (did I spell that correctly?) Any how, I just want you to know that you are a talented author. Your writing is so interesting! That's all for now. And i will try to wait patiently for the next part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inner demons? Crystal going to have a hard time convincing anyone she's not in love with Jason, most of all herself. Yep, it's obvious. Are they gonna kiss? I want them to kiss. ! ~Lee~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love this story, even though I've just started reading it... way cool! Keep going, ok? Way great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THis is a great story...gotta move the plot faster woman! haha...wanna read what happens get them together already! ) |