Reviews for Why I Hate You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! You did a great job at making this chapter seem sad from Crystal's pov. You could see her loneliness, as she sat inside the dark house. I'm glad Crystal's on the road to discovering her feelings, especially since Jason is too! Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good! Yay I can't wait to read the next one! I hope Crystal comes to realize how great Jason is and vice versa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I don't check for a couple of days and when I come back, I'm happily surprised to see not one, but 3 new chapters! Yay! This story is great, it's crazy! First her mom is marrying his dad, now her dad is marrying her mom how crazy! Well I'm onto the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() I liked this last chapter, there was a bit of action between the two, and Crystal seems to be opening up a little bit to Jason. But i want to know how Jason feels, cause it seems like he likes her. Update soon. ~BleedingOnyx |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww... he waited for her to get inside D I liked this chapter post more soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story... you're doing a great job. and all the twists in it are awesome. update soon! |
![]() ![]() Ok, I didnt get the connection with the title and the chapter but it was probably something i was too tired *yawn* to catch. good chapter, update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...i loved all this. so cute so cute. yay. it was a little sad..*cries* haha.. anyways..update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Realization can hit you like a smack in the face, and I have a feeling that's eventually going to happen to Crystal. And despite Jason's indifference to her, he was sweet. _ Post more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, the sexual tension between these two is nearly unbearable. They should just make out and get it over with (oh me and my un-romantic self...is un-romantic even a word? Well, it is now...) Anyways, Bittersweet is a good word for this chapter. Waiting to read more ~Lee~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *evil laughter* This is gonna be fun. ~lee~ |
![]() ![]() It's me! It's so me! Me me me! I'm right. I just KNOW it. Heh heh. Okay, enough RANTING! So anyways, this chapter was very beautiful written. Seriously, I was way impressed. I felt all those lovely pangs that make reading romance stories so wonderful. *sighs heavily* so great job. Great TALENT. That angst parts are always the best 'cause pain is fun to write. Now I sound morbid. But it IS FUN! 'cause there's so much heightened emotion to describe and play off of. Oh! so yeah, great chapter. Really sad without anything drastic having to happen. You took just an everyday type of event and made it tragic. Usually people have to write about death or rape or something like that to be sad. You're VERY VERY gifted as a writer. All right, I'll go now! La-de-da |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter! No it wasnt gross, it was sweet. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i love the development it's so cute! ) you always write such sweet stories. nice going keep it up ~k8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() what? are u kidding? of couse i wanna know what'll gonna happend it's so exciting, really thought tha scenes of romance, what? romance? OK, i need more of it, would ya? i'll be reading, dont worry haha ;) ok, im leavin' see ya! peace & love |