Reviews for A Descent
Toxix Harpy chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
It's one of those poems you can read over and over several times, and understand a little bit more each time. The words you use really enhance the effect, and make it truly beautiful. Each line holds power, another one of your poems I love.
Demosthenes-C chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
this is a really great poem. It amkes sense too, which is good, because sometimes poems are a little to weird to understand. I really liked the lines, "I have not joy or hope or pain, Ive naught to lose and not to gain." iT seems as if this poem was thought out. It was written well, good job.