|Reviews for Truth In Evil|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I like how you transition movement in this - your opening describes how they came to you, and then your last line points to how they've already come. It made the poem move smothly.
I think I liked the beginning the best, especially the line "Obviously evil" it's so fitting, and yet at the same time it felt 'new.' Keep up the good work.
| Written chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
The witches dont actually symbolize evil, just temptation [in my opinion, I'm not trying to be ruse XD]. free will to fulfill your own destiny and what not, showing that destiny and free will are intertwined and one and the same, working through eachother to fulfill eachother. I never really thought that they symbolized evil [but temptation perhaps], but it's still a really good poem about an interesting subject.
| the insane floo pot chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
You know I've never read Macbeth so I can't see the significance of it to your poem *grins* but hey look on the bright side you've just given me an incentive to go read it... I can't believe it I'm actually thinking about reading a Shakespeare play of my own will... well I guess I'm suffering from the effects over exposure to the wonderfully talented simpleplan... there's no other explanation! But despite my Macbeth knowing absence I loved reading your poem and I loved how you write and express evil even more! Now I must go read Macbeth some time soon _
| strummychick chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
i cant stand macbeth but great poem. like the second stanza lots,keep up good work!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
ive read macbeth before, honestly didnt like the play much at all but i do like tihs poem and i find it relates well ;)
| Isabella MacElfrish chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
WOW! Amazing! This is an excellent poem. Shakespeare would be honored if he knew you wrote this, and I'll bet he's grinning like a cheshire cat in the afterlife.
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
wonderful poem. yeah, "vaunting ambition" really was macbeth's tragic flaw. it's a pity the witches played with his mind like that. you conveyed his emotions well in this piece. nice job.
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
great job. i actually just read "Macbeth" in my lit class. )
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Really! Macbeth is one big self-fulfilling prophecy! _ And you summed it up beautifully here!
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Awesome. I love it.
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| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Good poem Good poem, I really liked it, ur an excellent writer, ya kno? I can just read it and feel ur poem. I also wanna thank u fro reviews uve given to me, I really appreciate it. Ill ttyl, Peace ouT!
| Mime chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
I definately see how you got this from Macbeth.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Wow, I like it, It seem so classical, good job! :)
| ApplesCM chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Wow. This is good! Thanks for the review, too.
| Kris 56 chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
WONDERFUL! I'm a Macbeth junkie! It's simple amazing! Wonderful! I like it!
I'm a fan of Macbeth and this is a wonderful poem. (I was in the play, as weird sister number 2) Cool! Amazing! I like it!