Reviews for Shadow Lake |
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Yume chapter 2 . 6/15/2004 The story and plot was good, though the second chap was quite short, and try to have a bit more spacing. Please update! |
MelanieJan chapter 2 . 5/17/2004 Great start. Cant wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can. :D:D:D |
CW-nerd-12 chapter 2 . 5/15/2004 I think if you wanted to make longer chapters, you could combine this chapter with the first. It'd make enough sense. Also, add some more description. Not only does it langthen pieces, it also makes them good! Update soon! I wanna find out what happens! |
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004 HEy, I really like this story so far! 1 thing: Chloe and HAyden can only be identical twins if they're, well, identical, I.E. exact genetic replicas of each other (they'd have to be either two girls, or two guys). As they are right now, they're fraternal. Love the story, anyway! |
chocomunke chapter 2 . 4/26/2004 I like this story (i like ours better lol jk) This is really good and I want you to continue it. |
Jen12345 chapter 2 . 4/24/2004 Hey its me again! Um yea this was a really really short chapter, but thats ok! Um update soon! |
Jen12345 chapter 1 . 4/24/2004 THis is a cool story so far. Next chapter! Yea... |
goodnight moonshine chapter 2 . 4/18/2004 YAY! I love it Lannei! Keep on writing! |
illusion0013 chapter 2 . 4/9/2004 I Love this story! Please keep writing! |
BlackGuardian13 chapter 1 . 4/7/2004 YEA! My post worked! |