| Reviews for To melt a frozen heart |
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   HouseOfJack chapter 12 . 12/14/2016 Was a nice story, good for a first original fic if over the top at times. |
| NightReader chapter 12 . 4/3/2015 Hopefully you didn't die or anything. If you ever swing by this again, know that there are still people who would be interested in you finishing it even if your writing style has totally changed. It would be great if you went back and fixed all the grammar errors/missing and incorrect words in the earlier chapters as well. Well, it was fun reading what you did write. Cheers. |
| Jamie chapter 12 . 2/16/2015 "I've got the outline in my head." Yeah sure. I was probably fucking 8 when you wrote this last chapter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 It's an interesting story,and I wish I could read further but the grammar is really terrible. |
| R. Ficst chapter 3 . 2/8/2014 The situation is so amusing :) Just a few grammar issues are a little distracting, especially where you switch in and out of past and present tense in your narration (not the flashbacks, I mean the writing). |
| Nu ha chapter 12 . 12/20/2013 Sorry, this is my first time reading this kind of genre, its kind of interesting, Is this story have been completed, coz its already kind of a long time, If yes where can I read it, r u posting it in another journal... please I'm really wanted to know what happen next? |
| morningstorm70 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 It's been a very looong time since the last update, please continue the story it's very good |
| morningstorm70 chapter 12 . 8/6/2012 OK so last update was 06 is the story abandoned? Would really like to know what happens next |
| Secret18 chapter 7 . 2/23/2012 This is a really good story ! I can't stop reading :D |
| Gravind Divine chapter 12 . 11/5/2011 nawwww i really wanted to know what was gonna happen next i guess you wont be continuing sadly that means we are all gonna be sad IM GONA KILL YOU FOR NOT CONTINUING! |
| GrimreaperSR chapter 12 . 10/30/2011 Damn! I wanted to know what Alu was planning! |
| witchcat chapter 1 . 2/6/2011 The only real problem I had with this is that the whole point of an arranged marriage is to join to kingdoms together, and if the king never has a child, they'll just die and the kingdom will be left without an heir. |
| Site-3 chapter 12 . 6/27/2010 I'm so sad you didn't finish this story. I was really looking forward to the wedding scene. |
| ayune01 chapter 12 . 2/15/2010 i guess this story is discontinued?. kinda left of hanging dont u think?. |
| ayune01 chapter 11 . 2/15/2010 how many days before the wedding?. |