Interesting, very dark. I like the repetition of colors and such.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

this poem is very very good i like how you wrote it...please keep writting
~Mandi

It's like abandoning all hope...and you've made it beautifully poetic.

wow, i love this poem! its amazing, and i absoultly love the line "let me land in the lilies and die". great job!

Beautifully written! _ It reminds me of an Evanescence song (hehe... Gotta love 'em _). Anyhoo, it was sad, but I love sad/ansty/dark stuff, and once again, it was beautifully written. Great work! _

I loved that. I have no idea why...I just did.

Wow, this is really well done...it paints a beautiful picture in my mind. Thanks for all your kind reviews of my stuff!

that was so good! i loved the last two lines especially. it's one of my faves!

Great poem. Really dark, like you described.

wow... that was... GOOD! I love the 'broken wings' part. Nice and angsty - speaking as a major angst fan. very well done!

I love the imagery (remember me?)! Also the words were well chosen. Keep writing!

o *standing ovation!*
any form of that emotion is one of the strongest, i don't want to put in words that it's anger but something along those lines maybe? but the other strongest emotion is love. it's the easiest to express and sometimes the hardest. i love the poem and the meaning behind it! keep writing i love it!
Vivi

This is good and don't worry about the rating. Mine, "Hanging from the edge" is rated G. So you have NOTHING to worry about. Though I do probably... maybe I should change it? Anyway, good poem!

This was darker than most of your other poems yeah, but dark in a beautiful way. You use great images and the repetition really brought more feeling into the poem and gave more meaning to the points. The ending was especially beautiful and melancholic without being too depressing. The poem sounded almost like a song lyric, because of the good flow. I thought it was amazing. Keep up the good work!

wow. That was awesome! I loved it. The end was great.