Reviews for Shame
EWindheim chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
"Only after it is gone forever, do we see what he have lost, or what be might have had, true pain comes do those who understand what they have lost..." Very true words. You really capture how you see life as well as what life really is.
Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Short, sad, and powerful. You will never cease to amaze me with your work. It is such a joy to read the stunning images infused with emotion that you have written... thank you. From someone who knows the feeling all too well, thank you for doing it absolute justice. Bravo.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
The mirror part sounded almost cliched but other than that I thought it was very good, dramatic. The last line was .. unexpected. I don't see alot of guy's poetry on this site ... maybe I just don't get around enough (the site..) but it seemed deeper because it was self scruitiny. It wouldn't have been the same if it was female-authored. Good. (r&r back?)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
heh! nice nice!
Aki Akito chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Awesome...that's all I can say...
Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
really great(good seemed beneath you)
thanx for pointin' me in your direction.
your irish lover
originality is dead chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
wow...amazing... love it!
keep writing!
-till the end-
lalamushu chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
my apologies that things didn't turn out that well w/ your friend. hopefully things will get better soon. _ good poem