Reviews for Veiled Candle
JackieTheWarriorPrincess chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
The entire poem was good but for some reason I thought the last line was the best.
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Another effing great poem. One of these days I might become jealous of your talent.
milhistbuff1 chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
poignant, dark but still a sense of hope. " Yet always, a candle shimmers somewhere in the darkness." Its only when no candle shines at all, that hope is lost.- great job, Matt
Draven DarkCrow chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
well done...very strong images...I like it.

xo
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Hm, not sure I really like this one. *gasp* Is that possible? I dunno, it just didn't fit the title very well. It was a good poem, but the title still doesn't seem to fit. Maybe a new title?
Tom Madden chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
sad..but that spark of hope i love. nicely written. great job! tom
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Sweet, sweet sweet! It starts out all sorrowful and melancholic and ends with a faint glimmer of hope. Love it!
Hawke
Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
beautiful, and perfect. I have written poems about this before, but yours is my favorite. wonderful *grins*
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
So very true... I know this feeling. But, in the words of a very wise friend of mine, there is always hope...Always.
Very good poem, once again. You're quite good. You make my poems seem so..horrible. Ah, well...
-Keep Writing-
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
nice!
lalamushu chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
this poem is really beautiful. keep up the good work.