Reviews for Demon of the Violin
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
interesting ... XD
Never the same
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
you've got a nice rhyme scheme going with this poem. great choice of words. keep it up0)
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Oh. . .*shudders* Creepy.
Some metaphors/word choices were off. "pony?" And there's a typo ("Wonderring.") But that aside, this feels so, I don't know, 19th century England. The rhyming- was it a form of sonnet?
Fantastic imagery- love the Poe influence at the beginning!
-Jessica
TalieZ chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
This would be a really good poem if you worked more on the rhyming.