Reviews for Hope
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Not my personal favorite, but it's good all the same. I like your longer, non-rhyming poems. Where are the demons, where is the darkness, where are they love? I kid.
Hawke
Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
not my absolute favorite, but it is well-written.
bach-player chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
i am not a rhymer...so my hat is off to you...and kudos for your publication! what an accomplishment!
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Wow... I love the rhyming. You really captured Hope, this is so good.
-Keep Writing-
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
aw thats really nice
Andaren chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Merry Meet!
What a lovely, uplifting poem! Great rhyming :)
I've written a few poems with similar points, which reminds me to thank you for the review :)
keep writing!
Blessed Be,
Andaren x
Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
*speechless*(Day of Silence )
i really liked this.
i wish that i could rhyme.
alas,i it rhymes coming from me,it took forever to finish.
always
your irish lover
behindNosweetSmIlE chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
This poem is absolutley amazing. You have a great talent.
Salix Nigra
Thanks for reviewing my work!
RellaRock chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
good times indeed
beautiful
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
The format for this poem is really good. I haven't seen it often used, and I love the description. Ah, to hell with it, I love all (or almost all) description! XD
Hrm once again I think you could have replaced a few words with some others, but it is hard to find ones that rhyme. It tells its story very precisely, and the little embellishments make it all that more enjoyable. Great job!
Karasu
A Perfect Circle chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Wow, I think you captured the true meaning of hope with this poem.