Reviews for Grandfather
GhostHelwig chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Well, I've finally reread it, and once again I remember why I loved it in the first place. If possible, you really should continue it - for someone I barely know, I find I'm quite fond of Ash. Or write something, at least. You have a gift. Use it. :)
No Wonder chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
That was so beautiful...I'm crying! Although it was *tad* farfetched I think it pretty amazing! I'd go into a little more detail on how the old man looked (i.e. wrinkles, hair - if any, teeth, etc.) Also, I think PG is a fair rating for it, but you're the author. :-D I'd love to read more stories about Ash's character too!
Keep on writing,
Jillian