Reviews for Badly Written Bio
Tk.T chapter 52 . 9/2/2004
Whoa! Ryan is your cousin...?
Happy writing!
Tk.T~
Tk.T chapter 48 . 9/2/2004
Hey! My review button is working...I'm surprised but glad nontheless. Yeah...I'm going to finish your bio to find out what the Big Event is...I thought it was your fling with Guy.
Happy writing!
Tk.T~
flyinfrogg chapter 27 . 9/2/2004
you are doing so great! I'm sorry I haven't been able to review, I haven't had a computer all summer and I'm barely getting back on one. I'm going to try and read as much as I can right now.
Ariana McKenzie chapter 53 . 8/27/2004
Oh goodness... that actually happened to me too... the whole second cousin liking thing without knowing it. Although, it was mostly stupidity on my part... and it wasn't on such a large scale. But still, glad to know I'm not the only one in the world. Well, I'll start writing my own bio... so thanks for the inspiration! -Ariana
Matt Green chapter 53 . 8/14/2004
Wow, this is the best biogerphy i have ever wrote... i have just finished it and it was amazing... i do think you should write more
Rach chapter 53 . 8/12/2004
HI!. thanks a lot I just really to review that one as I felt I could relate to it have you read the past stays with you I noticed that I could review so I did.
oh I have shown some to this extra english teacher that I have to help with spellings and stuff like that and she seemed to like them she seemed to really like a twilight zone story I did called hanging on she was suprised by the ending beilive me it's not as confusing as bible stories if you want to know more then ask but it might make this review too long.
wow so the guy you liked was your cousion well you don't get that every day maybe it's a good job things didn't go out of hand.
well good work on the bio
please update soon
see ya
Misty Spotts chapter 53 . 8/12/2004
HAHAHAHAHA! Oh my God! Now, that's how fate works, isn't it? That's how things were supposed to happen. I can't imagine how difficult things would be if anything had ever actually happened between you and him.
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Aw, but that's so disappointing, though! I wanted you and Ryan to get together. Now, you can't. What a bummer!
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What has he said about it?
Rach chapter 51 . 8/7/2004
HI!. I know I reviewed this chapter already but I was wondering if you could do me a favor.
there this fic on here called who am I I know you read it because I cheecked the reviews and I wanted to review but I couldn't because the author doesn't accept non signed reviews so I was wondering if you would review on my behalf just put hi or something like that.
I will understand if you don't want to do this for whatever reason.
but anyway good work on the bio
please update soon
see ya
LovesLostCat chapter 51 . 8/5/2004
Wow this is like a soap or something lol, i enjoyed reading the hints for me to carry on with my bio, perhaps i shall though I never have enough time, oh busy popular me :) What's in this email then aye? a virus? some plans to take over the world? britney spears naked? ok i'm going off on one, but you have to update this soon or i may get so bored i update mine duh duh duh!
Rach chapter 51 . 8/5/2004
HI!. um so you're a little confused ok.
the religon thing um she read it to teach a bit but the main reason was because the teacher before had only read stuff about voodoo which confused the kids and besides she does read some other stories she just goes with what the kids want her to read I mean it's their story time.
um I like the town meeting idea though I can of used a diffent tatic instead the head teacher writes a letter to her telling her that's she fired because of she is a disabled Jehovah's witness and that he feels sorry for Mark as he get the impression that's he's in love with her
but that's not what he tells the rest of the school he tells them that she told him that she asked to leave because she hated them which isn't true why teach little kids if you don't like them.
the head teacher did try to rid of her by getting an old enmy of hers to shot her but she's a real fighter and pulls though and Mark takes it pretty bad though which kind of proves the head teacher's theory.
does that clear everything up or are you still confused?.
oh and your other question well I mainly write stories for the fun of it really I will show them but I rarely do in case I get laughed at or something and besides people have trouble reading my writnig and I'm an awfull speller so that doesn't help.
hope that answers all your questions
please update soon
see ya
Godxi1231 chapter 51 . 8/4/2004
Wow you have such an amazing life! So complicated i could never manage with that. And update! Please?
Misty Spotts chapter 51 . 8/4/2004
NO! Not a Cliff hanger! Don't do that to me! Evil, EVIL girl!
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*sigh*
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poop.
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My boss just walked by and caught me, actually. Good thing I'm the executive assistant's daughter. _~ I'm the receptionist. All I do is sit here and unlock the door for people who don't have a key. The rest of the day is playing on the computer. (Not really, but basically, I have a lot of free time.)
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Yeah, with your friend Ness, I ruined a lot of potential friendships due to my extreme insecurities. It's tough for both sides of the relationship, and the ironic thing is that now that I'm more confident, I have NO patience for insecure people. Jeez, I'm a real bitch. Good luck with her.
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I'm starting to write my bio, actually. I've gotten up to second grade, I think. It's a lot of fun to write it. _ Never thought it would be, but it is. I'll start posting it soon. I just want to make sure I've got all the basics down. Man, my memory is terrible, too. I can't remember years and names and anything for shit! Ha.
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I forgot to mention before that I think it's really cool for you to share your life on . ...Um, there was more to that, but now I can't remember. Oh, and when I said confident, I meant within yourself. You basically seem like a pretty stable person, I guess. That's the only type of confidence that matters. We're all chicken shits when it comes to everything and anything else, you know?
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I'm so jealous that you're in England. That's one place that's nagging me to go to. But not just vist -I want to go and stay there, work there, live there. I don't know why. I just really want to go to England. I have no idea how I would do that, though.
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Anyway, PLEASE update soon. I'm like addicted to reading about your life more than a fictional story. ..._
Rach chapter 47 . 8/4/2004
HI!. you're not going to give up on me showing you one of my stories are ya?.
well to tell you the truth this is my dads screen name and I do not have my own and I don't know how to go it either and he may kill me if he finds I have given away the email to somewhere he doesn't know.
so to make up to it and since you really want to have a look at one of my stories I may as well tell a bit about one that I am working on.
it's called Bible stories it um about this new teacher who joins Tickford pre-school after one of the teachers have retired.
however she not what you call your normal teacher she is disabled (not in a wheelchair but you know) and she is also a Jehovah's witness (I know funny idea but bear with me)
so anyway the last teacher only read stuff about voodoo and she decides to read a book which is full of bible stories.
however this causes a lot of trouble since in this version it says that god's name is Jehovah and you know what some people may think about that.
there is one teacher that is nice to her his name is Mark Jefferson and also lets just say that cupids arrow cut pretty deep in him.
well I don't know what else to say about it really apart from there some dramra and a hint of romance.
so what do you think good, stupid,
let me know
please update soon
see ya
Misty Spotts chapter 47 . 8/3/2004
Holy Crap! You are the cutest person I have ever never known!
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I'm sitting here at work blushing and giggling as I read your story and your reaction to my review. Good thing no one is around to be giving me weird looks. _
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I can't believe you read Joshua. I thought no one did. (Did you review? I can't remember... I thought I had only two or something on that story.) I would love to finish it, (and I actually can because I have an ending, but I loose patience for some reason.)
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I am having NO luck whatsoever with a sequel to BB, though I thought for a moment I'd be able to pull off a prequel about Nora. It never happened, and I think it's because BB is an exceptional story of mine. I was in a very specific emotional state when I wrote it with a hyper positive optimistic view of the world immediately after I was so depressed. I have yet to match that degree of positive or negative (which I think is a good thing to finally even out) so I cannot come anywhere close to writing something worthy of BB. I love it just the way it is, anyway. It's from pressure from reviewers that I even consider writing a sequel. Honestly, I don't think it will work out. :( Sorry.
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I so want to write a bio now! Yours was so much fun to read. I wouldn't be able to stand forgetting things that happened, though, and then I get impatient because I'm filling it all up with *stuff* when I'd really want to be talking about things happening today and shit like that. Which reminds me... I thought you loosing your virginity was your big event, but after reading your reaction to MoonLily-something-or-other, you mentioned you hadn't gotten to it yet. Well what are you waiting for! Haven't you been in England for months now? What's been going on? PLEASE update sooner than September! Come on!
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Uh, let's see... Other stuff about your bio. Oh, damn, now I can't remember... Oh, I don't really know anything about the school system in Australia. So, you had all those hospitality courses in high school? My high school wasn't that specific at all. Just the basics, and that was it. And why didn't you want to go to a university? I get (and I know a LOT of other people in America) so much pressure from my parents to go to college straight out of high school. You didn't get any of that? Well, I'm jealous that you've gotten to choose what you want to do and have succeeded in it. I feel like I rushed things before thinking about it. I don't know. I'm happy for you.
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And I'm sorry about the situations with your mum and Rennie. I would not have handled that well at all. What I found so similar with you and me was the parents thing. For me, my dad was an evil prick who cheated on my mom since before I was born. There were so many little things that had happened before that final moment when he left for good. And then the after math of the bastards each of them were dating. I don't know if you've read Zoe yet, but the whole part of Zoe being abused by phone calls stems from a boyfriend of my mom's who would call ALL the time and in the middle of the night. Sometimes, he would not say anything at all, other times he'd yell at me because my mom wasn't home or she would be asleep and wouldn't want to give her the phone. He was a total drunk and the biggest prick. I was too young to realize how abusive it was.
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It was really the family thing that I found so similar with you, but socially, we seem to be quite different. You seem much more independent and confident than I ever was. I kind of related to your friend (uh...Ness?) when you described your problems with her because I was so insecure for the longest time and was extremely sensative about tiny things my friends would do.
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Anyway, I don't mean to ramble on and on. I should save all that for my own bio. _
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Again, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Talk to you later, sweetie. Bye!
Misty Spotts chapter 35 . 8/3/2004
hehehehe... that was pretty hard to follow. there are so many names and new names and this person likes that person things. but i found it all very histerical.
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