| Reviews for Badly Written Bio |
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   Diana Shore chapter 24 . 5/22/2004 Well written, but really sad. Hopefully, one of these days your mom will grow up and take responsibilty for her own actions, then apologize for blaming you when it is clearly NOT your fault. D |
| Diana Shore chapter 22 . 5/22/2004 Short chapter, but I liked the way you ended it. |
| Diana Shore chapter 13 . 5/22/2004 It's sad that your Mom was making you out to be the bad guy and so your Dad and Steven were coming down on you. I'm glad you have Michael. |
| Diana Shore chapter 9 . 5/22/2004 Ah, you're a better person than me, I would have told on my sister in a heartbeat had she been the one to rat me out! |
| Diana Shore chapter 8 . 5/22/2004 Hospitals, yuck! I like the description of waking up to your brother shoving chocolate in your face. Definately very brother like! |
| Diana Shore chapter 7 . 5/22/2004 Are you writing this too factually? Who am I to say? After all it is your story, so it's up to you what you share and how much you choose to share. I'm still reading and you have 35 reviews so you're obviously doing something right! |
| Diana Shore chapter 5 . 5/22/2004 The bike riding incident reminds me of an experience I had when I was kid; fortunate for me, I was lucky enough to land in some bushes when I flipped over the handlebars. Nice of you to take that man some chocolates. The encounter with Byron is hilarious. I loved your non-chalant reply to such a bizarre question. |
| Diana Shore chapter 1 . 5/22/2004 I think that's the way with all of us, we say we don't remember much of our childhood, but the more we think and write about it the more that's remembered. Onto the rest of the bio. |
| flyinfrogg chapter 25 . 5/21/2004 great job so far, you get your stuff up so fast! i think that you have inspired a lot of people to write autobios, my friend is writing one after she read yours! |
| flyinfrogg chapter 24 . 5/21/2004 your parents were nice to give you a cell phone, my parents would never do that! that's a terrible thing for you to go through, i'm sorry you did. |
| flyinfrogg chapter 23 . 5/21/2004 what's a schoolies week? |
| flyinfrogg chapter 22 . 5/21/2004 heather returning reminds me of when my friend cryatal came to visit from kentucky. |
| flyinfrogg chapter 21 . 5/21/2004 you should add some experiances to this chapter or funny stories that happened there just to make it a bit longer. |
| flyinfrogg chapter 20 . 5/21/2004 this was a short chapter, are you still friends with Carly? she sounds like a great friend. I would hate to have a job like that. |
| LovesLostCat chapter 25 . 5/21/2004 Yay, loads more to read, and it's still really interesitng. AND I got mentioned again! yay, keep writing Love xCatx |