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flyinfrogg chapter 18 . 5/20/2004 great autobio you have so far. your life is unique nad im totally interested in it. i think ive made a new best friend LOL. i like the casual easy read way you have put your autobio, it makes it so much easier to read, especially for some one like. someday you should go over it again and strengthen it. one question, im gonna sound totally american but what's a yammy? i might email you with more questions, i'd like to know what you're doing now (im sure ill find out in your autobio but still, previews are nice) by the way, thanks for reading my poem, your review is like the friendliest one i've gotten. i was thrilled to get your review. your personality sparkles, ) |
flyinfrogg chapter 16 . 5/20/2004 typical guys, i try to avoid spin the bottle games. your friend jess sounds really spoiled. its a good thing you are attracted to nice guys instead of other guys. |
flyinfrogg chapter 13 . 5/20/2004 its nice finding new friends, you made friends quickly. i only had one best friend till she left, then i found hannah, she's like a sister to me. |
flyinfrogg chapter 11 . 5/20/2004 im so sorry that you had to move away from heather, i know what it's like, my best friend moved away to. im also sorry for your parents, you must have had a rough time, i'll never know, my parents are still together. :( |
flyinfrogg chapter 10 . 5/20/2004 great kiss, LOL. that actually reminds me of some people i know. i'll admit right now that i have been kissed, technacally, i kissed him, i was only like three when i forced a boy that my mother was babysitting in a corner (I have a pic it's so cute.) and kissed, then for the next six years of his life, i chased him around kissing him. LOL. i was (still am) a wird child. but i've never had a REAL kiss yet, i think i'll save that for marriage. |
flyinfrogg chapter 9 . 5/20/2004 wow you were rebellious, in the US you'd get in a heck of a lot of trouble, like life in prison! you were lucky, i hope now you are a little better. |
flyinfrogg chapter 8 . 5/20/2004 wow, that must of hurt, i've had blatter problems for a while to, and they are not fun, especially when you are camping and there are no toilets anywhere. |
flyinfrogg chapter 5 . 5/20/2004 quite a flip you did there, your bryon sounds funny and perverted (in a slight way) i'm really enjoying your story. |
flyinfrogg chapter 4 . 5/20/2004 your life is quite interesting, i have never been more fascinated with someones life than your's. something intrigues me about it. *few spelling errors was all i caught* |
flyinfrogg chapter 3 . 5/20/2004 wow, not too many people are that smart at that age. i do have a cousine who is like four or five now but last time i saw her (she was around two) she took me every where and started naming things off, counting, saying her ABCs and playing sophisticated games for four year olds! Amazing how some people are smart at that age. some of your sentances were a little confusing around the middle of the end (i think) but otherwise you're doing good. |
flyinfrogg chapter 2 . 5/20/2004 that is so sad. i cried while reading about your sister. im sorry that you had to lose her such a long time ago. i can't believe you guys were so small. i only saw a few spelling errors. your structure is good. |
mizpah chapter 1 . 5/20/2004 your life is what you call an open book! hey not bad..even if it's titled a badly written bio..) detailed! it's interesting!just keep writing.. thank you for your review..i will never push anyone in believing something they don't want to..i said i was just being honest ) it's nice and i can't imagine myself writing my own autobiography in detail! just keep it up!*mizpah* ...God bless! |
Anat Qetesh chapter 18 . 5/19/2004 wow, you have been having such an extrodany life. with so many experinces and things! p.s thanks for the review and answer to ur question yes i have her permission, shes too upset to publish it herself, but we're soulmates so i know everything keep up the bio its great! |
flyinfrogg chapter 1 . 5/19/2004 im inspired by your autobiography, i look forward to reading it. |
LovesLostCat chapter 18 . 5/18/2004 German Club run by a French couple? I wish I could work somewhere like that, god I need a job I have no money, damn you for making me take time out of my, ehem, revision. yeah as if! anyway, yay i'm mentioned in your autobiography, if you ever publish this liek if you get famous or something, this so has to be dedicated to me lol. Anyway, keep updating it's still just as interesting, I should start writign one but I think I'd die of boredom doing it, oh well... untill next time. xCatx |