Reviews for Why Couldn't You Stay?
Naede chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
*sniff* *sniff* sad poem! BUT REALLY GREAT _
Stringergirl chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Oh,gee...i'm so's lame to say this, i know...but what can i say?U're really talented, and i'm serious abt that publishing stuff...i guess i should have read this poem first of all...that crying stuff's getting too old...but this is a real thing to cry abt...i love ur poems, stuart...keep it up...take care!
oh, and thanks 4 that reference to me in ur bio*blush*
beve chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
its really i have something to base my little sketch im doing for my church on father's day.i wanted to write about a father's love for his kid(duh) but where his child if i use ur poem as a guiding line?
oh and ur other song-i forgot to say i especially liked that part 'darkened by a tainted dream'...right now my nick on msn is tainted and im really obsessed with the words tainted and simplified right now...i know im crazy
K. Evenstar chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
I am impressed. I feel for you - it is always painful to lose a loved one. I hope that with time you will heal. This is well written: well thought-out and yet that does not stand in the way of the raw emotion. Good stuff.
Purplebunny chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
This is so powerful. Keep writing. Do u let anyone look into ure eyes to see you?
heartshapedbox5 chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Stuart (Rayne) you made me cry...That is such an emotional piece of writing, the best yet. Its always best to get the feelings down on paper (or screen whichever way you like) theres no way you can hoard so much pain inside of a skinny body such as yours. Keep up the good work!