Reviews for Introvert
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Very good. Your descriptions of such simple things were perfect.
Jedi Christ chapter 1 . 2/14/2006

- JC
Triden chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
OOH! absolutely fabulous! the subject is so simple and it would be boring, but you change into something meaningful! *two thumbs up*
Guinivere Sage chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Interesting way of putting it. We've all been there-the yelling, taunting, sneezing, whining. The bus can be so annoying, and yet... you got these thoughts from it. Ponder this: could the bus be a blessing because its atmosphere makes you acutely aware of the things around you?
Moira Brennan chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Wow. Just... wow.

This is one of the best descriptive pieces I've read in a long time. It was so exquisitly crafted that I felt myself flinching from my own uncomfortable memories of bus riding. I was a window-watcher too and so could easily picture myself doing the same things.

Very well done.
Phoenix-Pen chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
You hit the nail right on the head! For the last seven years I've spent about 2 and 1/2 hrs a day Mon-fri on buses and trams to get to and from school, and yes, they can be hell, but they can also be inspiring. I'm kind of planning a few short stories about the people I've seen . . .but I don't know, you've pretty much summed it up.
See, I can write nice reviews (although i'm still horribly verbose-I'll go read "The Phoenix" and see if I can write a short review!) Keep writing, and thanks for reviewing "The Prison"! :):):)
The Missing Spoon chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
I love the way you painted this story. I've so often felt the same...when I ride the bus, I do everything it takes to get the window.
I kind of want to read more.
Formerly chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Epiphanies on bus rides are cool. Only... there's no epiphany here. What?