Reviews for Broken
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
"See what money has done.
see what war has won,
There is no justice here". The last line is so powerful. Amazing!
Hawke
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
thats so bloody true! and good as well. wow... im like, speechless!
Aki Akito chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
...Tight, great poem, once again, great discription.
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Another good one! My fave line has to be "Hope falls from numb hands, speechless mouths can nothing say". Great job again! :)