Reviews for Patterns, Destiny, and True Sight
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
You are just a master of words, love.
Hawke
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
i see: a wonderful poet! sorry was answering the question at the end...
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Wow... amazing. A wonderful description of people and their tethers, and the last line was very powerful. Just a few things...
In the fourth stanza, the word rocket doesn't seem to suit the piece.
And in the fifth, the last line, boggles also just doesn't seem right. Maybe something a little more... dunno how to put it but sophisticated? Less coloquial, anyway.
Yes, reviews do become an addiction _
Karasu
freethephoenix chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
I see that your poetry is amazing.
"A light glows and shimmers within my soul,
I would cast my aura across the sky for all to see"
You give such powerful imagry. Beautiful, this is my new favourite.