Reviews for You Are
Charisma101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
If you would have added a chorus in this it would have made an awesome song, still pretty awesome, good work i love it!
MySweetPrince chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Nice poem, it was interesting and quick to read, also quite enjoyabe, but I liked it. Was nicely written. well keep it up. Ps, thanks for the review.
MagzRL chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
This is interesting, and in case I haven't proven it already, I'm a tough critic, so I give you my first honest criticism: I like it a lot, it's able to describe something well, but I have one remark.
At the part with the key, I think it would have been better if you switched that part around.
Amaya Windsong chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
very nice! it's very interesting and i like the way you capitalized the description words! good job!