Reviews for Princes are Evil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You asked in a previous chap if yu should try to get this published. I say. Yes. It need some polishing- maybe tone down a few of the word repeats, add a little ore descriptive/observational passages and there you have it! A fun Y/A novel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still love it! Just one thing: "gaining up on me" should be "ganging up on me". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Remember how I said I was your newest fan? I love quirky characters. And your quirky character is one of the most lovable I have encountered yet. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved your story. And Rhian has convinced me,rabbits are evil and will take over the world! Hehe! Thank you for writing this, it was really fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, to go find the sequel *wanders off to your profile page* |
![]() ![]() All that and all I can think of is 'KC chicken!' |
![]() ![]() Oh my. |
![]() ![]() please tell me this is just a troll story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The style of writing was so different for his point of view! His thoughts were so calm, so different from hers! May I say, not so all over the place like hers but not as sparkly, without life. Well, until he laughed. Than his thoughts started to have color. :) But I can understand him for keeping it a secret, Rhian was not ready. Thanks for sharing Gavin's thoughts with us, I was curious to know what he was thinking and the exact moment he laughed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, Gavin stayed as Nolan for a little bit longer than necessary. She should be mad at him for that. But then, he should be mad at her for leaving him...Better that they've forgave each other :D Training to be a queen...fun times ahead :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope Gavin will be back soon, I like him better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those fairies! They like to play with humans memories! So not fair! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They can be really mean with her, she just woke up from a coma and she's still in bandages...why put her through something like this and acting so rough with her?! This time I don't like Nolan... |
![]() ![]() ![]() He really just dropped her?! |