This story brilliantly blends humor and intrigue with a unique, vibrant voice that makes the protagonist both relatable and endearing. The playful, witty narrative keeps the reader hooked from start to finish.

You asked in a previous chap if yu should try to get this published. I say. Yes. It need some polishing- maybe tone down a few of the word repeats, add a little ore descriptive/observational passages and there you have it! A fun Y/A novel.

Still love it! Just one thing: "gaining up on me" should be "ganging up on me".

Remember how I said I was your newest fan? I love quirky characters. And your quirky character is one of the most lovable I have encountered yet. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

I really loved your story. And Rhian has convinced me,rabbits are evil and will take over the world! Hehe! Thank you for writing this, it was really fun to read.

Great work!

Now, to go find the sequel *wanders off to your profile page*

All that and all I can think of is 'KC chicken!'

Oh my.

please tell me this is just a troll story...

The style of writing was so different for his point of view! His thoughts were so calm, so different from hers! May I say, not so all over the place like hers but not as sparkly, without life. Well, until he laughed. Than his thoughts started to have color. :) But I can understand him for keeping it a secret, Rhian was not ready.

Thanks for sharing Gavin's thoughts with us, I was curious to know what he was thinking and the exact moment he laughed.

So, Gavin stayed as Nolan for a little bit longer than necessary. She should be mad at him for that. But then, he should be mad at her for leaving him...Better that they've forgave each other :D

Training to be a queen...fun times ahead :D

Hope Gavin will be back soon, I like him better.

Those fairies! They like to play with humans memories! So not fair!

They can be really mean with her, she just woke up from a coma and she's still in bandages...why put her through something like this and acting so rough with her?! This time I don't like Nolan...