-scratches leg- hum de dum de dum
Xander: ... umm... Mary... you're up.
o.o hum? OH OH! -coughs- ahem... HI! . This chapter was so good, I loved it. Vincent was so adorable when he was saying 'mine' to Margo. That was so cute. I giggled so much. XD And when I saw Why Me in the chapter I started pointing at the screening going OH OH OH! DATS MY STORY! DATS MINE! WE! . BAD BEN! BEN WAS BAD! -smacks Ben- .. -smacks Xander-
Xander: OW! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT WAS THAT FOR!
. I dun know... -shrugs- you did something, just don't know what...
Xander: .. damn woman -.-
. Anywho, the chapter was great and I really liked it, update soon! Wonder what will happen next. . Was that good Xander? Am I done?
Xander: -.- yes woman, that was good...
. Yay -goes back to scratching leg- itchy, itchy, itchy!

good chapter.. poor margo *hugs*.. what is up with damien? o.O -confused- anyway, interesting chapt. you rock. :P

Whe... powerful chapter! I likes Jesse :: hugs Jesse plushie :: Vincent's attitude ("Mine!") sort of confuses me, but in a good way _ I knew there was something wrong with Damien :: prods Damien :: Poor Margo... I love how all the emotions are laid out, even when they're supposedly hidden. It gives the reader a closer relationship with the characters... Update soon!

wow... *growl* new found hate for Damien. But truth be told i never felt safe around him anyways. In fact right now i would take Dominic over him. At least he doesn't lead people on to believe he's nice, he's atleast openly sadistic and evil . lol which..er.. is still bad lol but he's honest! haha great chapter! And Ben should be a little upset with himself, but Vincent needs to snap out of it, lickity split! *sighs* oh well,only time will tell! update soon!

you go, this is great. I just love it, this story is so cool. And I can't wait to see how it all ends.
keep it up.

wow! i finished! but i wanna know what happens lol oh well. I thought this chapter was wonderful (of course!) I really like Margo! hehe he's cool! anyways i hope you update soon!

aww i liked this chapter! there was happyness in it! not cold hearted sadism... But that's good too! lol i just needed a breather from all the angst. But lo there is yet another chapter coming up that i'm sure has some great sadistic actions from Dom. and some more sad revelations from Vincent lol i can't wait! (and no... I'm not wishing ill will towards Vincent or any other character but, i'm looking at the britter side! once things get as bad as they can they can only get better! I hope... -.-;;) anyways sorry for the rambling! on to the next chapter!

I like how Dominic ended up being nice towards the end! well..er.. as nice as he can be without ruining his image. I was amazed he even let Levi play with him! hehe i can't wait for the next chapter! sounds exciting lol

hmm... i'm sorta lost as to who the poor brown haired kid is on the bed? i figured out the "prisoner", but who's the kid? lol oh well! i feel sorry for Vincent, but he'll go back to his dad and brother right? or when you said that would be the last time Jon would see his brother, you were serious? ah the mystery... hehe anyways on to the next!

*sniffle* i actually teared up in this chapter. So i must say that is a good sign of excelent writing! *nods* but oh the tears! poor Vincent! *hugs him* i hope things get britter next chapter... though with good ol Dominic (a.k.a Leader a.k.a the antagonist in this story lol) i doubt there will be much fluff... oh well! on to the next! .

i'm back! wonderful chapter. I believe this is where i left off when i first began this fic lol so all the other chapters will be new for me! yay! *claps hands* i'm still slightly confused with Vincent... he's just shrouded with mystery isn't he? hahaa on to the next chapter!

..I love the way you write! :P I hope you update this soon..

another exciting chapter! good job here! my favorite part of this chapter is the whole boyfriend part in Richard's office hahaha i'm still laughing! poor Vincent! lol anyways it's later so i'm going to catch some zzs.

i know this should have been a sad chapter, but i'm still laughing from good ol Marc hahahahaha he's quite the charmer aint he? anways to the next chapter! lol

aww i remember this chapter! poor Vincent doesn't like to socialize... and he doesn't think very highly of people does he? oh well! he still very love-able! lol hehe anyways onward to the next chapter! yay!