|Reviews for So Another Drop May Fall|
| Agent D chapter 7 . 11/3/2005
I never knew you were also an original author as well. This story is so...beautiful. It doesn't take a genius to know that Avel has some really serious issues. The way you describe the objects, movement of things...so...realistic. You know, adding human qualities is actually a good thing, it makes the story sound much better than it is now.
| Toledo chapter 4 . 9/11/2005
This is a very nice piece, very intersting to read with just the right amount of drama mixed in. Very admirable. *applause*
| Ekatay chapter 6 . 8/25/2005
Very interesting. Avels' voices (or demons, perhaps?) constantly reappearing give you a good grasp of the characters' struggling. Not to mention, the voices are really creepy and haunting. I love the simple phrases they/it use, and how they are always asking Avel if he knows 'the truth'. An excellent way to keep the reader hooked!
| Ekatay chapter 5 . 8/25/2005
The description of that church is so vivid. I can practically feel how cold and damp it is, and see the peeling paint and rotting framework.
| Ekatay chapter 4 . 8/25/2005
Another good chapter, I particularly like where Avel reads what he had written for his therapy:'Murderer' Over and over again. The simplicity of that scene is what really makes it creepy.
I feel bad for poor Avel; with all his problems, it seems the happiness of life has faded into more of just the routine of existance. No fair!
Well, at least he has good friends.
And now Ari is in trouble. A very good way to end this chapter!
| Ekatay chapter 2 . 8/25/2005
This is a very good story; and that's a lot from me, considering I never would have thought I'd look at stories about talking animals. :D
I like the scene structure and the pace, both are very solid.
I can't help to think (being a girl n' all), how cute the characters are, but I'm preparing myself to hear of any/all of their vicious killings in the Great War. ;)
| Toledo chapter 3 . 8/23/2005
This is pretty compelling piece both emotion-wise philosophical-wise. Anyways, wondering if you could comment on my story I just posted up-On the Streets.
| Toledo chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
Hmm, nice chapter, definetely interesting, building up the suspense quite nicely and i din't notice any mistakes. Hmm, cool that you sort of used your penname for a character.
| Toldeo chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
hey, very nice start here, i feel that this is going somewhere really good. I wonder why you sort of abandoned this fic. Anyways, i'll read the rest of this when i have time.
| Pont chapter 7 . 1/16/2005
Hmm, you've been using the same type of entrance for chapters 1, 2, 3,5 and 7. It's not that big of a deal, just, if you ever go back over it- it's a little... redundant. Ah well, still better than I could ever do _He killed them... ick... well, they don't have to worry about them anymore. It was mean how they tried to use Meryl. Now /she'll/ be an interesting addition to the great chapter! Have a pat on the back and a cookie! :3~Pont
| Pont chapter 6 . 1/16/2005
Whoa, maybe Avel's getting it, but I'm not. Well done. Actually it feels like anybody should know the answer, but Avel can figure it out where the reader can't because of these memory chains he's going through. Wow. Good job.~Pont
| Pont chapter 5 . 1/16/2005
I like Ari, especially since we know all about Avel and nothing about her, though there's definitely more to Avel than we know yet _ Good chapter, heh, call me nuts but I never did like alcohol, /especially/ the smell. :P~Pont
| Pont chapter 4 . 1/16/2005
Uh oh... he better not disappear before getting the stuff for Beldin :PNice name for a tavern, I like how you give out information on a need-to-know basis. Adds to the drama _~Pont
| Pont chapter 3 . 1/16/2005
Ah, warrior's nightmares. A timeless written. I'm liking your approach to this story. Whenever I spot the italics coming up I think 'uh oh'.~Pont
| Pont chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Neat, this is working out quite well. What kinda cat is she? I've always loved cats _ Don't worry though, it doesn't do anything to the story, and I'm sure you'll tell us later. I likes, this has kinda a 'Redwall' feel to it, though mostly just because of the animal characters :P Very well planned out, especially the mysterious-but-cute Ari. Well, on to chapter 2!~Pont