Reviews for Dances with Demons
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Great last stanza - the way it sums it up and gives it such a finality. Anyway, interesting poem. GREAT title!

P.S. Thanks so much for the review!
Artemis Darkclaw chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
interesting...very interesting. I like it. wonderful imagery and interesting title. you can really feel the competitiveness between them.
Pocket Protectors are Sexy chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
I like this a lot for some reason. I'm getting a deeper meaning I can't explain. Hmm...anyway, keep up the good work!
And thanks for already reviewing my newest story "The Morgue Chronicles."
IHJ chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Darn. They couldn't find the server after the first review.
There's this irony between the title and the content of this poem, particularly the last line, that I like. Same goes for the use of vocabularly especially in the second stanza to show you trying to one-up your friend. Well-written and structured; good poem.
Izzy J.
philoslove chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Brilliant work. It's quite powerful too, I like the way you portray the competition.
FigureItOut chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
very cool; kudos to you, I like it
Georgie Pantazis chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Nice imagery and structure. I like the theme you chose too... the constant struggle between two friends always in competition whether they know of it or not. Nice.
trisket-n-gunther chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
nice job on this! i liked it, it was interesting and enjoyable to read, keep writing! please review me back thanks!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
i like it... nice imagery... i like the second stanza a lot... great job
Blondeggman chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
whos this about? another good poem by lindzoid