|Reviews for MODERN ALICE|
| Soul's Eclipse chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
I can't wait for the next chapter!
| MoriMorte chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
GAH CLIFF HANGER! u have 2 update SOON or else.i wish u luck on ur writing,and i can't wait till the next chpt.!
btw would u mind reviewing my book forgotten tears and shadows?i'm an ammature writer and i need some input from more exspierenced than myself.
| Shojogurl chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
Pleez update soon! I'm about to cry! That was so sad! Thanx~*Shojogurl*~
| gossamerdragon chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
YAY! he's not dead! but he's being a jerk instead (for a good reason.. but he should just darn listen) only tow more chapters *cries* (including the epilouge)I'll miss reading it! and go Ami (I really didn't like her that much before)Ok now that I feel really stupid, I'll go
| CrystalDusk chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
NOO! AYA! that wasnt nice... all the boys in this story are immature. well aya is slightly more mature... but still. and stupid riku! someone should kick him.
| Hell's first Icicle chapter 19 . 9/3/2005
no. jesus! damn you. now i'm crying. *sniff* go away
| Love Lulu chapter 18 . 9/2/2005
You know, I was expecting Aya's attraction towards Arisu, but once you read it, still gives you the shock of your life. Poor guy...it's just a very forlorned vision of him sitting in the cafe alone with two coffees on the table. ::sniff, sniff:: Poor she-man.
Well, all in all, this was a great chapter in my opinion. Grammer was pretty good, which is always a way to get on my good side. I'm one of those picky people who can't stand bad grammer.
I happily await the next installment. Until then...
| xbluxmoonx chapter 19 . 9/2/2005
Ah, very good story! I just hate flames so much, don't you? I got a flame for a different story at fanfic, and i was hurt. Stop attacking my characters! AGH! Heh, anyhoo, please update soon!
| Coeur Sans Espoir chapter 19 . 9/2/2005
...Riku?...He was so mean! I know how he feels since I've been through the same type of heartache. Even though he was mean he could have kept it inside but I guess it was too much for him to handle. Poor Arisu. I hope Riku is nicer to her next chapter.
| Jamie aka chapter 19 . 9/2/2005
Ah. Kiley is back, Aya is gone, and Riku is still as slow as ever-It's like going back to the first chapters, well, except the whole Riku and Arisu like-loving each other. I'm so happy now because you updated so quickly, although it makes me feel bad for not doing the same. I can't wait for the next chapter and I am so happy to hear that there will be another story after this, although it hadn't occured to me that you wouldn't write another, so, uh, who? Eh. I hope the next chapter is easier for you to write and I'm sure it will be just as excellent as this one.
| Elilah chapter 10 . 9/2/2005
im not done yet but this story is super good!
| shibi chibi chapter 18 . 9/2/2005
...NO! EVIL. EVIL. EVIL. ...::stabs:: ...i mean. uh...doo doo doo do
...can't touch this. ;]
| with a flourish chapter 18 . 9/1/2005
OMG! Aya confessed! O_O Aw, I kinda feel sorry from him... Does he need a hug? _V Please update soon!
| blackrose113 chapter 18 . 8/31/2005
wow! i love this story! i'm so glad i found it. please update soon!
| Oona-ee chapter 18 . 8/31/2005
oh.. okay.. because i was wondering whether it was a typo or not.. thanks for telling me!..
wow.. you added so many new things in this chapter!... and when Arisu found Riku like that.. wow.. that kinda gave me a scary mental image.. ;;..
hope you update soon! great chapter by the way!