|Reviews for MODERN ALICE|
| some-one chapter 21 . 10/25/2006
the story was great but the ending was really rushed.
and i got really confuse on the radio part.
so basicly they made up because she called and told him she like him alot.?
but great story..gosh it even made me cry when he told her to leave..
how sad and depressing.
| Arrisan chapter 21 . 10/20/2006
hmm all in all..cute story...I thnk the end was really rushed though..and the whole thing on the radio was kind of tacky haha but thats ok tacky is good too sometimes..anywho...nice
| Wai chapter 5 . 9/13/2006
cute-but I have one little problem-everything is kind of moving extremely fast-hopefully things start to slow down-I dunow hat else to say-but its good-writing is great just not eough detail I guess. Good job
| A. Pikachu chapter 21 . 8/24/2006
Well. I feel rather ashamed that it was just in the twentieth chapter that i realized her name was a romanization of Alice.
Anyway, I absolutely loved this piece. I can really imagine it as a Korean TV Drama of sorts, actually. I also like the way you write. For some weird reason, everything seems rather vague yet i can see everything clearly. Hmm. The ending seems tragic to me, too, even if they did meet up (apparently). It's short of something, i guess. But other than the inconsistencies, it was a very wonderful read.
Have I told you i can really imagine it as a Korean TV Drama? XD
| atreyu love chapter 21 . 8/17/2006
so the guitarist.. (i forgot how to spell his name) k.. something. .yea, he quit the band? and who else? mm.. good story now im listening to x japans "say anything" i dunno, it made me think of this story ;; lol anyways LOVE THE STORY AND YOUR WRITING :D
| atreyu love chapter 20 . 8/17/2006
oi oi, did she go to NYC? to go to her brother?
| atreyu love chapter 19 . 8/17/2006
i love the VK world and POCKY :D
| atreyu love chapter 18 . 8/17/2006
hmm.. cutting? suicide?
| atreyu love chapter 17 . 8/17/2006
i think aya may start liking her
| atreyu love chapter 16 . 8/17/2006
did you change the bands name to MODERN ALICE? i thought that was just the title of the story.. not the band.. wasnt the band named ALICE BLUE?
| atreyu love chapter 15 . 8/17/2006
korean dramas are soo cool :D and my sister LOVES hot gimmick, though im not much a fan of it ;;
| atreyu love chapter 14 . 8/17/2006
oi, riku is so ... funny XD
| atreyu love chapter 12 . 8/17/2006
um.. isnt monophobia by moi dix mois? not plastic tree? Gah! im sorry if im wrong, i was just thinking that it was by moi dix mois ;;
| atreyu love chapter 11 . 8/17/2006
heh, attacked by fan girls XD lol
|atreyu love chapter 10 . 8/17/2006|