Reviews for Through the Closet Door
Cattails chapter 33 . 2/15/2005
Yay! He's finally free! Sorta...I'm glad that he and Tamika are finally talking again, and they are coming up with a plan _ Can't wait to see what happens next!

~*Cat*~
An Inside Joke chapter 33 . 2/10/2005
I'm a little confused on the timing and too lazy to go back and look up dates. How far along is Tamika supposed to be?
K. Starling chapter 33 . 2/8/2005
I like this a lot - I read it in one sitting, and kind of very blown away and can't think of anything coherent. So, sorry this isn't a real review, but I'm very interested in what's going to happen next. Ooh, one thing I'd like to mention - I think it's interesting that Alex is Macedonian.
YSYF chapter 33 . 2/5/2005
Well...stress revealed..though not surprising. As for the conversations that we heard about-interesting. It seems Alex and Tamika are becomign friends once more...so that's all for the common wealth to my eyes. Well, not much else to say, other than you used the wrong version of "weight" in the chapter...you said "wait" when you meant "weight"...
blrghjefsadkfjhadf chapter 32 . 2/4/2005
Poor poor Alex...his father just won't trust him, now will he? Ah well, I knwo what it's like, not having peple trus tou with anythign becaus eyu attmepted suicide, or were on the verge of it...*coughcough* Just ignore that comment...As for the calls, interesting...ex-girlfriend, former best friend, Tamika, and his mom...well, I guess you'll be forcing us to wait to find out what happens...suspense-best key of any writer. As for the reviews-I'll understand if oyu don't get around to me very quickly, because I feel as if I need to add somethings to Angelic Demon before I'd want it critiqued...but my poems are free game, I've posted a gaggle of them recently, if you're interested...Guess that's all I have to say, so please hurry and update...

Loves, hugs, and kisses, YSYF
Angel 864 chapter 17 . 1/2/2005
DakrSorceress! God, how I've missed your writing! (It's Drama John). Excellent wirting, as usual, and if I didn't have to go to work I would be reading the rest of this story.
Firgof Umbra chapter 31 . 12/31/2004
The end was just the beginning...

-maelstromchaotis
Xtreme Red Dragon chapter 31 . 12/25/2004
You did well so far on the story. and yeah you did take a long time to update but it was a well written chapter. I cant wait for you to update it again. I want to see how the issue with the child is really going to work out. Also i want to know how his parents is going to react to everything. I also know he has to have feelings for Josh. and i want to see if that ever leads anywhere. I hope it does _ Anyway hope you update soon, and again your doing great!
An Inside Joke chapter 31 . 12/18/2004
The chapter seemed a little like he was just going over what we all already know again. I'm curious was to whether turning to God will make much of a difference to him.
Cattails chapter 31 . 12/17/2004
Wow, Alex's life just gets worse and worse, doesn't it? Aw well, I'm sure he'll come up with some kinda solution (other than death). I really don't like his dad. He's not very open-minded, is he? Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Tata~

~*CaT*~
YSYF chapter 31 . 12/12/2004
Alex turnign religious? There's something I never expected to see. Twas quite a urpirse, that last line of the diary entry. As for long periods between updates-understandable, I'm sure 10th grade is killing you...unlike me for some odd reason. Anyway, I hope to see some more updates on all of your stories here soon. Also, could you please read my new story, Angelic Demon? I'm looking to see what more people besides my close friends say about it...
Cattails chapter 30 . 11/19/2004
Wow, this is good! This guy really has it tough. I like how it's set in Canada . And in the Toronto area! I like the angst in this, how it's not completely overboard, but not light enough to miss. It makes you want to keep reading to see what he'll do next. I want to know what's going on with Matt and Josh! . (Past stories are always fun .) Well, tata! I really hope this has a happy ending! Update soon!~*CaT*~
An Inside Joke chapter 30 . 10/28/2004
I'm a little confused. The first paragraph talked about leaving the hospital, but it sounds like he's back in it- or still in it. What's going on?
Kazza2085 chapter 30 . 10/25/2004
short but sweet... I like it keep it up!
Khenna chapter 29 . 10/9/2004
I never look at dates on the diaries, bad habit of mine when I'm reading a book, sorry. Interesting chapter though I would like to comment, as a frequent diary writer, that it is simply impossible to record an entire conversation like that. I have tried. I have failed. Trust me, not possible.
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