|Reviews for we are invisible: a variation on the universe|
| ICU2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
i like the way you wrote this and how it made me feel, I espacially liked this stanza
We are invisible; a kiss to the hollow of my ear
Though it would have been better suited to a sharp
Incision of a flower-ovary (which has no
Voice, what is
Has no voice)
Or the tearing of my gloves, settled quietly in your hands.
It makes me think of abortion, which is a very confusing subject
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
I love this... I really do...
| Fate chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
So, would you mind terribly if I just repeat what I said before?
Other than that, this is somewhat heartbreaking, though I can't pin down exactly why. Just is.
Damn you and your talent. Damn you, I say!
| precious breakdown chapter 1 . 4/10/2004