Reviews for A Twinkling Above
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
That was really beautiful. I really adored the imagery and your metaphors. A really touchnig piece. Awesome!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
this poem can take at least two stanzas:1)literally: gazing at the stars scattered across night's sky,

2) metaphorically: cherishing your faith despite tough times.

just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
This is really beautiful. I like he hopefulness of this piece.
EWindheim chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
*cries* Aww's beautiful. Even though it is a bit of paraphrasing of one of my poems, this made me cry. Thank you so much.
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Wow. That's so beautiful. The stars are so beautiful, always shining, always that little light there in the darkness... Of course, you say that much better than I do.
I love the structure of it, how you have the three line stanza and then that single line. It's so powerful that way.
I especially liked the ending. It's so true, the stars always shining, always there...
~Keep Writing~
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
jesus u write a lot and post fast! sorry was looking at the days and all. esh!
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
This isn't actually that angsty... just quietly sombre. Lovely, beautiful imagery.
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
I love the images this brought to my mind. They were beautiful! Nice work!