Reviews for Forced Feelings
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Spiffy style, I like it. Especially like the last two lines. I think someone found that key to set your soul free *wink*
Hawke
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
I like this style. It's edgy...If you read it out loud, it gives even more of an edge to this piece.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
ah nice stlye! oops that should say "style"... *sighs* i cant spell so blah :P nice poem!
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Aah... so sad. I love the lines,
"Don't mind my sufferings,
I try to fly away on broken wings."
Somehow this really speaks to me.
Karasu
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
O! This is juicy! And for what you claim to be an experiment this is awsome! You gotsies talent! Good work!