Reviews for Heartstrings
Voice of a Pen chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I like itSomewhat differentshould maybe have a part 2 just a suggestionCheck out someof my work
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Ahh..love. Such a simple word, yet it holds so much meaning and so much power.
Hawke
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Ah, Love...
I love the rhyming, and it's nice how short it is; straight to the point but without rushing. Very good.
My favorite line is "So freshly built, yet ready to withstand a storm"
...Excellent work, once again!
Keep Writing
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
nice nice nice wonderful! (oh yeah, sure, thats a creative review, *rolls eyes at herself*)
JunipertheSwift chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Great imagery. I like it a lot. Good job, keep up the good poetry writing!
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
If I could relate, I'm sure this would really reflect my feelings, but I can't. Still, I am in awe of your description, just one spelling mistake in the third line: pathe should be path, methinks.
Karasu
Catella Estelle chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
M, a serious, almost dark love poem. Very nice. Hehehe, not happy fluffy words that i like but this one was still very appealing.
(do you like Trigun? LOVE AND PEACE X_X) _
Anywho, great worK!
Little Dog Muse